the first drop feels a tad underwhelming, i feel like you could have done some crazy chops or perhaps added some layers to the main color bass. actually i feel like a lot of sections (like the breakdown and the pre-drop) drag on for a bit too long; introducing some progression using risers and impacts or just cutting the length in half should help significantly. but, i enjoyed the minor tonality! the second drop was quite a neat switchup, i liked the resonant color bass sound design. overall not bad!