nice so far! maybe more than two chords in the progression would be nice tho, it gets a bit stale after a bit
nice so far! maybe more than two chords in the progression would be nice tho, it gets a bit stale after a bit
yessir
an absolute husk of creative expression, irredeemably soulless. 10/10
marvelous! the key and chords remind me of subtronics and ganja white night's "womp portal", perhaps they are the same? the main bass is pretty cool, although i feel like it may lack some stereo width. the chiptune leads are also really nice!
i do feel like the mix is a bit too saturated in some places though. but i think you could just eq some space for the sub and maybe also turn it down a bit?
very good overall
pretty cool! the melodies are really nice, for being about war and anguish.
i do feel like there isn't enough ambient noise and high mid density in the mix, i'd suggest perhaps using multiband compression or maybe turning down the low mids a bit, and adding more high mids (1-2khz) to the existing elements, to make the whole arrangement hit harder. i think maybe a more ambient section in the middle would have been nice, to balance with the parts with the drums
quite good tho!
Thank you very much for the suggestions, these comments are really what motivate me to continue making music. <3
maybe not breakcore per se, but still quite a cool tune nonetheless. the melodies are really sweet, and i like the ambience of the pads and the offbeat triangle wave. the vocals are the cherry on top too
the massive dc bias in the waveform looks concerning tho
ooh spooky, i do feel like there could be a bit more reverb on everything, but the sound selection is incredibly solid.
I’ll be sure to remember that, even though I used a fuck ton of reverb already 😂
damn your sampling and arrangements are always so cool, both in the "awesome" sense and in the "temperature" sense
i like the alarm-sounding bass harmonics in the beginning. this almost feels midtempo-esque though, not sure if it's bass house.
pretty little tune with a really cute 808 beat. the piano in the latter half is incredibly soothing and really adds to the atmosphere
Thank you so much! :D
vibey beat! i like the vocal offbeat grunts and chops, almost feels like an electronic wardruna song in a way
of course, i'm not quite a fan of the noisy keys that come in at 0:41, but i can forgive that
the melodies sound really cool! i like the general atmosphere and progression, especially the dubstep part
i do feel the mix is very flat and muddy though. the drums don't really pop out all that well either. but overall it's nice!
I suppose that's fair, all things considered. Regardless, thanks for the feedback!
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