i love the frenetic mood, and the sound design is really cool too! however, the mix is definitely too saturated, probably due to too much sub bass. i'd try cutting out sub in non-sub instruments and failing that just turn down the sub a bit
i love the frenetic mood, and the sound design is really cool too! however, the mix is definitely too saturated, probably due to too much sub bass. i'd try cutting out sub in non-sub instruments and failing that just turn down the sub a bit
that's just about how i feel about it too lol
thanks for listening :)
i'm really loving the minor tonality here, as well as the gorgeous melodies! admittedly the production is a bit rough in spots, especially the basses and to some degree the pads and chords, i feel like they could use more post-processing or a more unique flair. i also feel like there could be more ear candy, like impacts and other transitional effects. but overall this is very nice!
a bit rough in arrangement, but otherwise pretty cool
an absolute husk of creative expression, irredeemably soulless. 10/10
marvelous! the key and chords remind me of subtronics and ganja white night's "womp portal", perhaps they are the same? the main bass is pretty cool, although i feel like it may lack some stereo width. the chiptune leads are also really nice!
i do feel like the mix is a bit too saturated in some places though. but i think you could just eq some space for the sub and maybe also turn it down a bit?
very good overall
pretty cool! the melodies are really nice, for being about war and anguish.
i do feel like there isn't enough ambient noise and high mid density in the mix, i'd suggest perhaps using multiband compression or maybe turning down the low mids a bit, and adding more high mids (1-2khz) to the existing elements, to make the whole arrangement hit harder. i think maybe a more ambient section in the middle would have been nice, to balance with the parts with the drums
quite good tho!
Thank you very much for the suggestions, these comments are really what motivate me to continue making music. <3
maybe not breakcore per se, but still quite a cool tune nonetheless. the melodies are really sweet, and i like the ambience of the pads and the offbeat triangle wave. the vocals are the cherry on top too
the massive dc bias in the waveform looks concerning tho
ooh spooky, i do feel like there could be a bit more reverb on everything, but the sound selection is incredibly solid.
I’ll be sure to remember that, even though I used a fuck ton of reverb already 😂
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