exquisite! i love the vocals and electronic instrumentation! the lyrics speak to me in a way too, although i can't place how
exquisite! i love the vocals and electronic instrumentation! the lyrics speak to me in a way too, although i can't place how
cool find! pretty neat tune too, i like the kick drum pattern and the chip lead solo in the second half
i feel like the sound design could have something more to it, these sounds are a bit too "plain" for my liking. i think maybe some more experimental aspects like ott or spectral glitches would take them to the next level.
another related gripe of mine is the arrangement, i think the drops are a bit too chaotic and lack a solid hook.
lastly the mix is quite saturated in an unpleasant way. the kick drum in particular really crushes the mix with every hit. maybe you could try decreasing the bass going into the master limiter/clipper with a low shelf filter?
Hey, thanks for taking the time to write that, I appreciate your feedback for sure. I think the aim for this track was to recreate the old-school sounding dubstep, specifically the original Skrillex era, back when he first starting making music. If you listen closely the mix does sound very simple and plain, and contains nothing but mechanical sounding basses that can sound chaotic and messy at times, but I personally think that sounds pretty cool, but on the other hand I do completely understand that dubstep is an acquired taste, and takes a certain level of understanding to appreciate, so I think it was more of a style choice. But in terms of the second drop, I can see how it might've fallen a bit flat, and to be honest it's not my favourite either, so again it's just a matter of opinion. And as for the mastering, I did get a tad lazy here and just left it, purely because it continued to flatten the grittiness of the track and reduce the quality in the bass, but personally I think it sounds fine as is. It's not perfect, sure, but I like it, and that's what matters. Thanks again for taking the time to comment :)
i like it! i enjoyed the hopeful melodies, the processed vocals, and the color basses.
however, i feel like there could be more ear candy in the mix, especially in the intro and some parts of the drops, like risers, impacts, little glitchy details, especially in the basses, and whatnot. also the arrangement feels a tad messy, like some elements don't come in exactly on the downbeat, which normally isn't a problem but i feel like here it makes everything a bit too loose. lastly the mixdown could be a bit cleaner and not so hectic; eqing and sidechaining channels to each other really helps
hopefully all this helps!
cute and spooky! the fairly minimal but nonetheless crystalline production compliments miku and teto well :)
i've said it before under a different account but i'll say it again: this slaps!
especially relevant here in the usa
have to say i agree with this quite a bit.
hope you have it better soon!
exquisite sound design and melody! i like the way the clap is mixed too
damn, this is one of those tunes that unexpectedly sneak up on you and worm into your ears. the vocals and melodies are quite catchy! the remaster sounds great too
really cool bass! i like the high slide notes, although maybe it's a bit too saturated and prominent in the mix. the pristine synth strings that come in at around 1:40 contrast well with the other distorted sounds. the hip-hop esque drum patterns in the first half also sound fantastic in this context; the switch to more dubstep-esque drums is quite cathartic. overall amazing!
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